this is an optional blog post, that i am completing so i can get a full grade for the blog.this is talking about about the research question generation paper, from which i obtained the question that i probably will stick with, for the rest of the semester.

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Revision Plan Brainstorming Questions:

-Do you need more specific examples?
i should maybe include more examples of what kind of opportunities already exist, like maybe a short word on the declined DREAM act, or Obama's executive mandate that accomplished the same goals

-Do you need to revise with your reader in mind? (better explain things)
i can probably write more about my direct motivation with the issue, to make them better understand why i am writing on this topic

-Do you need to reorganize your points?
both me and my reader agreed that the points in my essay are in a good order, and get the point across correctly

-Do you need to take the filler out?
at this point, i do not have any filler, and in fact, i need more to fill out the essay, as it's already barely meeting the requirements

-Do your main ideas need to be clearer? When in doubt, tell the reader your main idea as soon as possible, then, discuss how you got there.
i think that the ideas are already clear enough on my essay, as i introduce my question very early on, after my introduction paragraph

-Should you rephrase your research question to take the complexity of the situation into account?
i could maybe rephrase the question to introduce more aspects about the costs of all of those extra programs, or perhaps including why some people would not want to introduce these programs into place

-Do you need a new research issue?

no, my reader liked the question, and thought it was a good idea, and even my teacher said that there would be a lot of sources from where to get information

-If it is not in MLA format (uses in-text citations and a works cited page) this should be on your revision list.
my paper is not in MLA format, and it is on the list to do